Business Proposal for a new website

Dear Ms, I am writing you this mail ater a close consideration of many of the available freelncers at freelancer.com. i think you can provide the best service to what im looking for. I have an idea for a start up that i would like to start moving. its a web platform (website) for global buyers to buy from chinses manufacturer,but with a twist. i have written a document (attached) which is pretty similar to a business proposal. I am looking for a freelancer that will totally revise my document and make something much more coherent about it so i will be able to present it to potential investors. i am still not in a point that i need a business plan, because the concept is still not complete. so i basically need someone who will take the info in the text, write something completly new which is much more business oriented and coherent. I also need some financial sections to be added, i have no idea where to begin computing the needed investments and financial matters, so if you can add some general costs and predictions,that will be a big bonus another thing is the issue of the marketing strategy. i wrote a small text regarding the brand and message i want the website to present. adding marketing strategies from your previous expirience will be great. i also didnt wrote an executive summary yet, a strong executive summary should also e written by you. let me know what you think, and what would be the costs. @@@@@@@ THE DOCUMENT WILL BE SENT ONLY TO THE CHOSEN FREELNACERS@@@@@@@ Kind Regards, Alon