Note: I had inadvertently posted this bid while logged in as a colleague's UserID, so am submitting it afresh logged in as myself (have retracted other bid from user Jimthehorsegod)
I have recently completed working with a small agency creating websites for SMEs, typically only 1-3 pages in size, and hence focussing on short, snappy, attention-grabbing sections of text, something I think applies well to your requirement.
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss further your project - I have read your notes in the attachment and I think I can make improvements with you on the highlighted sections, and make the piece as a whole flow smoothly.
I would also be glad to learn more about your Company (beyond what is already in the existing bio, of course!) Additionally, I would like to know more about how you intend to use the finished piece, and in what context, to assist in maintaining the correct tone in the writing.
Look forward to hearing from you
Chris
-concretefish