Urgent!!!! College Application Drawing Portfolio Design

I need a professional who works in the field of Fine Arts or Design (must hold at least a BFA degree) to look at my portfolio for college admission. I have no more than 20 pieces (most of them are sketches) and need the MOST HONEST opinion. In fact, I'd like to assume that each and every work needs to be improved. Please don't simply tell me they are fine. This review needs to be done in 2 days, and in English. Thank you very much!