Hi there,
I’m Dallas, a content writer based in the U.S with over 3 years of professional writing experience.
Before getting into my qualifications, here are some of my recommended edits for the article:
I think that while brevity is valuable to the readers who are likely to skim an article looking for the information that’s most relevant to them, this article could use a bit more meat. Keyword density is high, making the article feel awkward and inorganic, which is generally off putting to readers. To combat this, I would include a bit more information in the introduction elaborating on the specific benefits of a pre-workout supplement, as well some final thoughts at the end to round the whole thing out.
Additionally, the article begins as “we” and transitions into the first-person “I,” so I would fix this to keep it in the royal “we” throughout.
Finally, I’d definitely want to include more information about each product. For example, how do they taste? Are there any drawbacks to keep in mind? Concluding with a bit of a buyer’s guide to help readers determine the right product for them as well as what to keep in mind when using a pre-workout supplement would help give the article more authority and provide additional value to the readers.
Let’s connect so I can send you writing samples and discuss your project in further detail!
Thanks, and looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Dallas