Hi, there.
I have take a look on those shops and I have several ideas provide for you.
My ideas:
1. I can provide you customized Premium theme which including sexy & passion photo to enhance conversion rate.
2. I can show you my previous client store related to sex toys.
3. Based on my 3-year experience in dropshipping, those sample store looks like Amazon or AliExpress, which will greatly affect your conversion rate. If I am the customer, I don't prefer the stuff looks like 'Copy-and-paste'.
4. Don't use paragraph form to describe your features, point form & directly point out the benefits, how to improve the relationship with your partner will be highly recommended.
You can contact me for more information, I can provide unlimited revisions until you satisfy with the designation.