IMPLEMENTING GREEN BUILDING PROCEDURES FOR RESIDENTIAL BUILDING CONSTRUCTION IN ABU DHABI

IMPLEMENTING GREEN BUILDING PROCEDURES FOR RESIDENTIAL BUILDING CONSTRUCTION IN ABU DHABI Product: Thesis Editing Education Level: Masters Subject: Engineering Citation: Harvard References: 80 English: US Paper Length: 200 pages\55000 words Deadline: November 18, 2014 Details: Title : IMPLEMENTING GREEN BUILDING PROCEDURES FOR RESIDENTIAL BUILDING CONSTRUCTION IN ABU DHABI SUBJECT AREA : Civil Engineering - CONSTRUCTION MANAGEMENT EXAMINER COMMENTS are on the THESIS EVALUATION REPORT according to which this thesis needs to be fixed my thesis included 40 references and the examiners commented to add more 40 references to be total 80 so the writer should incorporate more 40 references on my thesis topics attached more examiner report for writer information and action. PFA Examiner Comments on each chapter in PDFs The attached file (After Viva-chapter.1) is the same chapter which was justified by the writer but I removed the covering page, table of content and abstract because I will submit it later on for my supervisor. So, I forwarded only Chapter.1 for my supervisor. and My supervisor forwarded the same chapter and Viva evaluation report showing his comments. hopefully the above explanation is clear for the writer in order to comply with my supervisor comments. please be informed that the first file including my supervisor comments on how to clarify the changes made for chapter.1 in the evaluation report. The second file is my supervisor comments on chapter.(which was justified previously)by the writer . hopefully the above explanation is clear for the writer in order to comply with my supervisor comments. This revision is to be focused on CHAPTER 2 with all 3 Examiners comments to be taken in focus Please forward the attached file to the writer. I want the writer to comply with the all comments in this report for chapter.2 and to do same as I made for chapter.1. please let the writer read also chapter.1 and base on chapter.1 he should organize and focus on chapter.2 Chapter 2 is not clear and need more improvement Please find attached my comments on chapter.2 furthermore, the writer should re write this chapter and focus on the examiner comments: [login to view URL] whole chapter required major improvement and restructure in term of contents and related references. 2. This section should focus on the objectives of this research needs to achieve. [login to view URL] section should highlight the specific variables identified in the literature review [login to view URL] chapter should conclude with the findings from literature review and state next step of the study. =================================== if the Writer read the evaluation report he will understand that the examiner want me to change the literature review topics according to the objective and aim of the research ====================================== Chapter 2 is not clear and need more improvement Please find attached my comments on chapter.2 furthermore, the writer should re write this chapter and focus on the examiner comments: [login to view URL] whole chapter required major improvement and restructure in term of contents and related references. 2. This section should focus on the objectives of this research needs to achieve. [login to view URL] section should highlight the specific variables identified in the literature review [login to view URL] chapter should conclude with the findings from literature review and state next step of the study.