Hello,
I would be happy to do a line edit of your newest book. My services include going through your book, line by line, and improving the sentences as needed, including dialogue, descriptive writing, word choices, sentence structure, punctuation, and varying sentence length as needed for maximum impact.
Let me introduce myself. My name is Julie Webb, and I’m a professional editor and proofreader with 36 years of experience, which includes working on a wide variety of fiction books, nonfiction, autobiography, short stories, articles, web pages, and more. I use Microsoft Word with the Track Changes feature turned on so you can easily see the work I have done for you. I will not change the style of your writing; I respect your work as an author.
I offer you excellent quality work. Here at Freelancer.com my work has earned a 4.9 out of 5 rating from 215 employers, as shown at https://www.freelancer.com/u/jw010699.html. My employers' comments include, "This is my third time working with Julie. She has done a fine job and took care of the details. I definitely recommend her!" "Julie, as always thank you a lot for your attentive editing!” and "This was really excellent work. I will hire her again."
I would enjoy doing a line edit on your novel and hope to hear from you soon.
Have a great weekend!
Julie Webb