Proofread 544 words as pilot

[Proofreading: 6 product descriptions + 1 blog] It is a short document (8 pages or 544 words). Images in the document will make you understand more about the product descriptions. Please find the attached. I am not only looking for the grammar but also for native English speakers who are familiar with women's clothing or fashion trends. At the same time, the description should be in a very natural way, which mean I am not looking for too much strict grammar or elegant way. (What I am trying to do is the involvement with our customers) After this pilot, there will be many chances to go for ongoing project as far as I update products bi-weekly. Please update me your work every 3 hrs of work. (I want you to make it done by one day this time actually)